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The Labyrinth

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You are sitting in the dirt, your back straight against the stone wall. The ground is not hard nor soft.

"How will I ever get out of this labyrinth?" you ask yourself quietly.
Despite the fact that no one answers you, you are certain that you're not alone. You have heard other voices, so you believe that others must be trapped as well. Have they heard me?  You wonder.  Surely they must have. Yet, you've never actually run into another person, or even seen them here. It is as if everyone has their own maze, with personalized walls to fit the unique circumstances of this common predicament.

With a sigh of frustration, you get up off the ground. As you stand in the cool soil with your bare feet, you say again, "How will I ever get out of this labyrinth!"
The wind howls, and you could almost swear you can hear your name being carried in the breeze. You find yourself being tempted to respond, but feel like doing so would be surrendering your sanity. Instead, you turn to face the wall which separates you from freedom. Freedom from this prison that is far too painful to stay in.

You consider trying to climb out and lay your hands against the dark stone. However, you examine the wall's height and your heart sinks, for you begin to imagine how your skin and nails would become torn and bloody. No...As horrible as the labyrinth sometimes seems, it is better to stay put than to hurt yourself further by trying to escape. It may not be a shelter, but at the very least, it is a sanctuary. And it is very real.

Finally, you begin to walk, as you have many times before.  Despite the sensation of defeat, you find yourself smiling. "I will solve this intricate puzzle. I will reach the center of this maze," you announce to no one in particular. Perhaps you are right, or perhaps you are not. The only way to find out for sure is to walk through it. For, we will likely all find ourselves inside a labyrinth at one point or another in our lifetime. Maybe one grand labyrinth; full of beauty that we never want to leave, or maybe many; most of which we will not come out of unscathed.  

...But that's alright, because not all of us can be like Theseus, and take the Minotaur down in one blow.
Second person?! Whaaat?!

Another story for which I can't take full credit. I recently finished reading Looking For Alaska by John Green. The protagonist, Miles aka Pudge, is fascinated by "last words" (i.e. "They've got to see us" - James Dean).

This story is inspired by General Simon Bolivar's (look him up) last words: "How will I ever get out of this labyrinth!"
There is an ongoing debate amongst the characters as to what the labyrinth represents. Alaska insists it is suffering. I, however, feel that her perception is too vague. Near the end of the novel, Chip states that he would rather stay in the labyrinth than take the easy way out.

So, I believe that whatever is causing this suffering must be worthwhile. I reflected on this, and now I have my own idea of what the labyrinth is. And I turned it into a piece of my own fiction.

Btw, if you don't get the last line, it is referring to the labyrinths in Greek mythology. A minotaur is a half-man, half-bull that was said to be found in the center of the labyrinth. Scary shit. If you've played D&D you would know.

...Sorry, long description.
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DaneBainbridge's avatar
I thought that worked really well for second person. It seems to work best in small doses.